- This was one of our first attempts.Problems we faced with this video was timing we had 1 minute 3 seconds plus about 22 seconds for the distribution company, this we felt was too short, we also decided that the actors were saying there lines very quickly and this didn't convey the message that the patient was meant to be shy and the psychiatrist was meant to reassuring and calm, this is why we decided to film this again.
- We also noticed that the film was very quick in realizing the problem and we noticed that this wasn't typical of the genre we looked closely at the ring where the problem was mentioned in the first two minutes and we noticed that they had incorporated 'general chitter chatter' between the two girls. This is why we decided to change the script so we can include general talk between the psychiatrist and the patient. Before we did this I looked at a video which I also looked at for 'Location and Staging' to get an idea of what sort of talk goes before a therapist meeting.
- We also looked closely at the scene where we had used the editing technique ' blur' to in the shot with the blood on the hands, after some feedback where people found it difficalt to understand why it was blurred, but more vitally didn't understand the why there was the voice over saying 'I see blood on my hands' after this feedback we realised that it didn't quite make sense and we had to scrap this idea.
